Saturday, October 22, 2011

I am.

I am a ghost.
A mystery.
Not successful and I won't improve.
I'm wandering in the dark
While others, in the light.
I wish I were sharper,
clearer,
defined,
and informed.
However, I am
unnoticed. Random. Low-qualified.
Mistaken. And I should
soon be coming to an end.

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4 comments:

  1. Yours Truely,October 25, 2011 at 7:35 AM

    i like this. kind of depressing. but shows a lot of emotion. GREAT JOB(:(:

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  2. Sarah Richey WilliamsOctober 25, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Ya it was kind of scary but at the same time got the point across with emotion. I could feel for ya!

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  3. effervescent laughterOctober 25, 2011 at 9:29 AM

    Amazing emotion in this piece, you chose fantastic words and placed them perfectly! It flows and sounds like it was meant to be itself and doesn't need to lean on the original text :)

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  4. Maria WilliamsOctober 25, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    I really like all the specific adjectives describing what she wants to be. Is it a she? I think I just made that up...

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